Hi Devon,
Thanks for writing this

I've made some tweaks that I hope you find acceptable:
My letter to Matt Damon
Dear Mr. Damon,
My name is Devon Fowler, and I'm with the non-profit human life extension organization, imminst.org, short for the Immortality Institute. We decided to contact you because you have always come across as an open minded and free thinking individual. Basically we want to get you interested, if you are not already, in the concept of real human life extension potentially within our lifetimes.
This means living not to 80, but 100, 150 even several hundred years, mostly due to the intervention of stem cell technologies and other rejuvenation therapies which includes the exciting field of genetic engineering.
We are a very serious and scientifically based group of over 8000 members some of who are leading researchers in biotechnology, bioengineering, and many hybrids of these fields including bio-gerontology or the study of human aging from a biological standpoint.
Just to clue you in, we are not looking for any charitable donations! We really are looking to inform people, and as project manager for the VIP team I think contacting big name celebrities such as you will bring clout to this cause of all causes. 150,000 people die of Aging everyday in the world, and it maybe even more now. To us this is unacceptable. Some say interfering with the “natural” process of aging is interfering with the natural order of things. Well if that's true than human's have interfered with the “natural” order of things ever since we started to cure any diseases! I hope you see my point.
Some of the most exciting research into slowing down, halting, and even reversing the aging process in humans is being run by British Gerontologist Dr. Aubrey De Grey, who formed the SENS research foundation to use a ground up engineering approach to combat the 7 causes of aging.
I have many links and articles that I can give you if you are interested in what we are doing. In light of this I would also like to formerly invite you to one of our online talk shows called Sunday Evening Update which runs 6:00 pm on Sundays here at imminst.org in an online chat format. We've had many notable scientists, speakers, enthusiasts chat on our program including Dr. De Grey himself, famous biologist Michael Rose, Ray Kurzweil's private doctor and many more.
You don't have to be knowledgeable at all in any anti-aging sciences or philosophies, we are really looking for bright people like yourself who could offer your time to learn, even briefly, about this cause. Enclosed is (whatever book Portal wants), that I hope you'll find time to read.
I look forward to hearing back from you!
Sincerely,
Devon Fowler
Project Manager for VIP Outreach Team.
fowlerdevon@gmail.com
Cell: 617-905-3979
Dear Mr. Damon,
My name is Devon Fowler, and I'm with the non-profit human life extension organization, imminst.org, short for the Immortality Institute.
Paragraph break added here to give a second's value to the name.We decided to contact you because you have always come across as an open minded and free thinking individual. Basically we want to get you interested, if you're not already, in the concept of real human life extension within our lifetimes.
Removed the word "potentially". Since we're talking about a concept here, there's no need to add the "potentially". We are trying to interest people in the concept of real human life extension within our lifetimes - no need to disclaimer it as it's a concept, not an actualityThis means living healthily
*Added this word not just
Added this word to 80, but 100, 150 even several hundred years, mostly due to the intervention of stem cell technologies and other rejuvenation therapies which includes the exciting field of genetic engineering. Time is what we need to defeat death.
Added this last line, to make it clear firstly that the point of the letter is not "Money is what we need to defeat death", and secondly to include the possibility of actually defeating death, not merely delaying it.We are a very serious and scientifically based group of over 8,000 members some of who are leading researchers in biotechnology, bioengineering, and many hybrids of these fields including bio-gerontology or the study of human aging from a biological standpoint.
Just to clue you in, we are not looking for any charitable donations! We really are looking to inform people, and as project manager for the VIP team I think contacting big name celebrities such as you will bring clout to this cause of all causes. 150,000 people die of Aging everyday in the world, and it maybe even more now. To us this is unacceptable. Some say interfering with the “natural” process of aging is interfering with the natural order of things. Well if that's true then
Corrected typo from "than" humans
Removed incorrect apostrophe have interfered with the “natural” order of things ever since we started to cure any diseases! I am sure that you appreciate this point, though.
Rephrased this last line to assume his intelligence, and also make it the point rather than my point. Say "my" in a context like that, and you'll look like a one-man-army, which while sometimes laudable isn't the impression we want to give.Some of the most exciting research into slowing down, halting, and even reversing the aging process in humans is being run by British Gerontologist Dr. Aubrey De Grey, who formed the SENS research foundation to use a ground up engineering approach to combat each of the seven causes of aging.
*Slight rephrase for styleI have many links and articles that I can give you if you are interested in what we are doing. In light of this I would also like to formally
Edit for spelling - "formerly" means "previously" invite you to one of our online talk shows, called "Sunday Evening Update",
Edit for subordinate clause and inverted commas, lest it all run together which runs 6:00 pm on Sundays at imminst.org
changed from "here at imminst.org - contrary to appearances, we people, including you, actually exist in the offline world in an online chat format. We've had many notable scientists, speakers, enthusiasts chat on our program including Dr. De Grey himself, famous biologist Michael Rose, Ray Kurzweil's private doctor and many more.
Could you please include some non-scientific celebrities in this? Otherwise he's left thinking "Yeah, but what am I going to talk about?".You don't have to be knowledgeable at all in any anti-aging sciences or philosophies, we are really looking for bright people like yourself who could
omitted "offer your time to" - this is to take emphasis away from it being a burden on him and his schedule learn, even briefly, about this cause. Enclosed is (whatever book Portal wants), which I hope you'll find time to read.
I look forward to hearing back from you!
Sincerely,
Devon Fowler
Project Manager for VIP Outreach Team.
fowlerdevon@gmail.com
<-- I think this should be an @imminst.org addressCell: 617-905-3979
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For your convenience, I now repost that without most of my annotations:
Dear Mr. Damon,
My name is Devon Fowler, and I'm with the non-profit human life extension organization, imminst.org, short for the Immortality Institute.
We decided to contact you because you have always come across as an open minded and free thinking individual. Basically we want to get you interested, if you're not already, in the concept of real human life extension within our lifetimes.
This means living healthily not just to 80, but 100, 150 even several hundred years, mostly due to the intervention of stem cell technologies and other rejuvenation therapies which includes the exciting field of genetic engineering. Time is what we need to defeat death.
We are a very serious and scientifically based group of over 8,000 members some of who are leading researchers in biotechnology, bioengineering, and many hybrids of these fields including bio-gerontology or the study of human aging from a biological standpoint.
Just to clue you in, we are not looking for any charitable donations! We really are looking to inform people, and as project manager for the VIP team I think contacting big name celebrities such as you will bring clout to this cause of all causes. 150,000 people die of Aging everyday in the world, and it maybe even more now. To us this is unacceptable. Some say interfering with the “natural” process of aging is interfering with the natural order of things. Well if that's true then humans have interfered with the “natural” order of things ever since we started to cure any diseases! I am sure that you appreciate this point, though.
Some of the most exciting research into slowing down, halting, and even reversing the aging process in humans is being run by British Gerontologist Dr. Aubrey De Grey, who formed the SENS research foundation to use a ground up engineering approach to combat each of the seven causes of aging.
I have many links and articles that I can give you if you are interested in what we are doing. In light of this I would also like to formally invite you to one of our online talk shows, called "Sunday Evening Update", which runs 6:00 pm on Sundays at imminst.org in an online chat format. We've had many notable scientists, speakers, enthusiasts chat on our program including Dr. De Grey himself, famous biologist Michael Rose, Ray Kurzweil's private doctor and many more.
Could you please include some non-scientific celebrities in this? Otherwise he's left thinking "Yeah, but what am I going to talk about?".You don't have to be knowledgeable at all in any anti-aging sciences or philosophies, we are really looking for bright people like yourself who could learn, even briefly, about this cause. Enclosed is (whatever book Portal wants), which I hope you'll find time to read.
I look forward to hearing back from you!
Sincerely,
Devon Fowler
Project Manager for VIP Outreach Team.
whateveritsgonnabe@imminst.org
Cell: 617-905-3979