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#1 AdamDavis

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Posted 03 August 2007 - 08:30 PM


The following poems are only three lines long each, similar to Haikus. I wanted there to be more words in the first two lines than in the third, some times more syllables to, with the third line acting as a conclusion or summary of the prevous two. I hope you like them:

The ascending celestial lighthouse
Flickering shadows on the landscape
Pulsar sunrise

Megascale art of the heavens
Luminous dust on the voiding canvas
Nebulous portrait

The eternal drone
Of unceasing vibrations
Patience...

Snowflakes and flowers
Cucumbers and seashells
Esoteric cymatics

Nanoneuro Zen
Nirvana through technology
Technobuddha

Orbiting celestial bodies
Vibrations of superstrings
Cosmic harmony

Folding DNA and proteins
To make funky shapes
Nanoorigami

#2 AdamDavis

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Posted 11 August 2007 - 08:36 PM

Here are a few more poems. I wrote them so that the first two lines would have the same number of syllables as each other, with the third line consisting of a single word with fewer syllables:

Hugging my giant pet slug
Stroking its left antenna
Slimey ^_^


From deep within my brain
Come electric pulses
Awaken...


Jagged metal sears flesh from within
Convulsions of a technofetishist
Tetsuo!

#3 Brainbox

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Posted 11 August 2007 - 10:06 PM

I like them.

Not quite mainstream, but who cares. :p

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#4 Cyberbrain

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Posted 12 August 2007 - 09:46 AM

Yeah I like them too!

#5 AdamDavis

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Posted 13 August 2007 - 07:49 PM

Cheers guys [lol]. Here are some more in the same vein as the previous three:

Hyperdimensional sacred geometry
Posthuman mystics of harmonic proportions
Magus


Hoist them golden solar sails!
Lets conquer the seas of stardust...
Enterprise!


Will we ever ascend to the
Summit of that great pyramid?
Omega point

#6 AdamSummerfield

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Posted 28 August 2007 - 10:31 PM

Megascale art of the heavens
Luminous dust on the voiding canvas
Nebulous portrait


This is my favourite.

- Sezarus

#7 Athan

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Posted 29 August 2007 - 12:22 AM

The eternal drone
Of unceasing vibrations
Patience...


I really like the rest of them too, but that one is my favorite :)

Good stuff!

#8 AdamDavis

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Posted 29 December 2007 - 06:38 PM

Thanks again :-D. A cryonics poem I composed:

Immersed in the ice
I peacefully await,
I took this drastic step
Before it was too late.

"Death will never take me!"
I swore to my broken self,
I plunged into the mist
To be ageless like an Elf.

Beckoned by the Cosmos
To surf the wind of change
Harmonise with vibrations
Of unlimited range

From this bodily drone
No sadness and no fear
I so long to be thawed
Released into Utopia!

#9 AdamDavis

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Posted 20 February 2008 - 09:28 PM

A poem about Vita-More's Primo Posthuman:

Primo posthuman
With precision and control
Orchestrates her body
Her mind, and her soul

Primo posthuman
Sexy, high-tech' being
Youth as well as wisdom
Neural implants teething

Primo posthuman
With hyperempathy
Embraces, envelopes
All in proximity

Primo posthuman
Through foglets in the air
Waltzes on Europan ice
Flourescent is her hair

Primo posthuman
Harmonious and wise
Amplifies her happiness
By 'bots, nano-size

Primo posthuman
Infinitely clever
Surfs the wind of change
Destined to live forever

#10 Cyberbrain

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Posted 20 February 2008 - 10:23 PM

Dude, you've got to publish these :~




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