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#1 Lazarus Long

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Posted 15 November 2003 - 07:04 AM



I send this song

Through quiet night before gentle shades of dawn

Whispered with a zepher scent by magyk mysts of morn

Nestling upon your neck sharing warm your body's bliss

Finding shelter from past night's storm the distant thunder warns

Balancing on fluted golden notes harmonizing loving calm

Aglow against the end of night

Alone again will never be your plight

The flame's alight

The gentle face of Luna divides day

A living Sun defines her Knight

Her wish is won for her light shines bright

Your face finds joy and your smile makes all right

Forever in a second the song sustains a coda's plight

For ever in a second sight from heart to heart

Our mind's vision formed by third eyesight


#2 seanait

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Posted 23 December 2003 - 02:09 AM

That's very deep, but also beautiful. Nice passage! :)

#3 Lazarus Long

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Posted 23 December 2003 - 05:34 AM

thank you seanait

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#4 bacopa

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Posted 23 December 2003 - 05:39 AM

Red ships of spain Red ships of spain!

#5 bacopa

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Posted 23 December 2003 - 05:40 AM

Actually quite nice Laz very poetic




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