I had a feeling to write a song yesterday...
This is what came out.
It does have a melody, I'll find someday sooner or later time to record myself and upload it over here.
Till then, feel free to comment your opinion on my lyrics, or just get an impression.
Take Me to Your Loneliness
Your silence strident
Loudly from distance
Thy absence burns me to ash
The ash as the dust
Like the stars full of lust
The infinity sets in your eyes
So why is it so hard to recall them so sad as commemorates me your voice…?
The recollection goes to devastation, as your silence keeps screaming-
Take me to your loneliness
Spare me facing ignorance
Remind me how you found the way
Into my heart
Was it ‘cause you needed a god?
Or was it so you’ll have a playfield?
Am I pure enough to hide,
And learn the reticence?
My sweet intensions turn dark, I’m losing my mind while you’re there and you can’t see me-
Take me to your loneliness
Spare me facing your ignorance
Remind me how you found the way
Into my heart
Take me to your loneliness
Spare me facing your ignorance
Remind me how you found the way
Into my heart
Tomorrow, tomorrow
And once more, tomorrow
Tomorrow my dear never comes
Don’t you to promise
If loneliness stack is
Blocking and binding your arms
Take me to your loneliness
Spare me facing your ignorance
Remind me how you found the way
Into my heart
Take me to your loneliness
Spare me facing your ignorance
Remind me how you found the way
Into my heart
Take me to your loneliness
Spare me facing your ignorance
Remind me how you found the way
Into my heart
-Infernity
Edited by infernity, 08 September 2005 - 06:22 PM.