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Graceless Creatures


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#1 Infernity

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Posted 06 November 2005 - 08:40 PM


Here's a creative riddle I have written for no reason ^ ^
I for some reason don't think you'll solve it, but anyways- good luck

Read this scrip and answer who are these creatures:

Graceless Creatures

Always and everywhere thou shalt find them
In deadlocks and deserts
They do not mind
No one thinks of their existence
But when rage is set
They shall be the first to feel the shudder
The shudder of bloodshed

So small, so vexing
They devour whatever is there
From sweetness to soil
From waters to blood
The innocent creatures are fed from what we cry for
Beloved ones flesh
Up to what we fought to have

What we cry for
What means so much to us
They eat innocently
And we just watch and weep
So thoughtless they are
Eat and then spoil whatever they touch
Hideous creatures we all could live without

What we like so much
What is sweet and tasty
They steal shamelessly from us
But unlike for the dead ones
This makes our fury wake up
That is when they suffer
Because we are yet not broken enough to not mind



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Um, this is unexpected answer ;))

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#2 Trias

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Posted 07 November 2005 - 12:14 AM

I'd suggest "GERMS", but this line has made me change my mind:

Hideous creatures we all could live without


by using the term "creatures" ; does this mean that they have to be alive?

mmm.......... maybe free radicals? oxygen ?

Tough one.

#3 Infernity

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Posted 07 November 2005 - 02:18 AM

Well Daniel...

I'll give you two hints

1. It is not that small ^ ^

2. The difficulty sentence, ok I'll help:
~ "Hideous creatures" - - When I look at "From sweetness to soil" sentence for real- it makes me think so, and when I look at it in magnifying glass too.
~ "We all could live without" - - Hell yes!

Good luck [lol]

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#4 Infernity

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Posted 07 November 2005 - 02:14 PM

One friend of mine solved it =]

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#5 Infernity

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Posted 15 November 2005 - 04:43 AM

9 hours to solve this. After that I will submit the answer.

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#6 Matthias

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Posted 15 November 2005 - 01:27 PM

sorrow, worry, troubles, problems? .... I don't know.... asteroids, meteors, comets?

#7 Infernity

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Posted 15 November 2005 - 02:38 PM

Hehe "so small, so vexing"... When you have no element of comparison it is mostly compared to humans...

Eat and then spoil whatever they touch

um, anything with asteroids?! [huh]

Another shot..?

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Edited by infernity, 15 November 2005 - 03:04 PM.


#8 Infernity

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Posted 21 December 2005 - 02:57 PM

Ohh forgot about that, wassname just PMed me heh.

Here we go, the answer is .......................... ta ta ta da............. FLIES.

:)

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Posted 23 December 2005 - 08:35 AM

Ohhhh I should have got that, its so obvious!

#10 Infernity

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Posted 23 December 2005 - 09:34 PM

Heheh, obviously :)

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